11-3 in class

1. What have you done well with your papers based on the teachers feedback? In general what are you doing well.
A: On the first paper I stayed with one topic and talked about that throughout my paper. I did not start rambling about a random topic. On the second paper, I did not do that so well. I got off topic a lot, and did not stay with the main point. In the second paper, my teacher thought I did not completely understand the topic. I thought I did, but I guess I didn't. In both of my papers, I did different things well. I am incorporating the stories we read in class well with my papers.

2. What is one thing based on the teachers comments you can improve on?
A: I can improve on staying on topic. I start writing and when I run out of things to say, I just start rambling and get way off topic. I need to find a topic or idea I can talk a lot about and just talk about that main topic. I thought I did a good job of this, but apparently I did not, so that is something I need to work on.